Saturday, September 13, 2008

2 Versions of the Same Thing

1.
I'm a hitch-hiker across spiritual terrain
thumbing a ride on the dharma caboose.

Choo-choo!
Choo-choo ch'boogie!

(A poetically mixed metaphor I think...)

2.
I'm a hobo tramping spiritual terrain
riding the rails on the dharma caboose.

Choo-choo!
Choo-choo ch'boogie!

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